


IDEAS-
I used the trait "ideas" in my college application essay, My college essay was based on personal; experience and knowledge which focused on this trait. By focusing on this trait I realized that a good essay includes personal experience or research. Adding supporting facts or evidence will make my essay stronger and more effective. In this essay, I told a story of one of that hard parts of being a teenager. I incorporated personal experience and thing I learned from it..
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My writing has good supporting evidence on what I learned through experience or research.
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Another assignment I did this semester that involved this trait, was my coming of age essay. This essay was based off of personal experience and knowledge. In this writing piece we were to show and tell a story of how we "came of age". To me, coming of age means it is a turning point in your life where you have to make tough decisions and chose the right path. My essay had reflection based on what I learned from the mistakes I made through personal experience.
