


VOICE-
It is clear that I am the one writing the essay.
Another writing assignment we did this semester that I included my voice in was my Angry letter. Writing a persuasive essay means writing what you think down on paper. In my angry letter, I wrote to Brandy Melville about their one size fits all policy. I had to incorporate my personal experience along with the views of others to make a strong essay.
During this semester we learned about different traits that we needed to make an effective essay. In my Coming of Age essay I needed to incorporate voice so that the reader would feel the same things I wanted them to do. By making the reader feel certain emotions, my essay would be more effective. I needed the person reading my essay to know that I was writing and saying the words that I felt so they would understand it more.
